Thread:Sabovia/@comment-25234599-20140804083558/@comment-25234599-20140817212544

Hi Soika - are you able to help me improve the article at all? It's now being marked for deletion and I'm still genuinely struggling to understand what is unsuitable about the changes I have made - I feel like I have done what was asked and it hasn't been registered? Happy to make further changes if I can just have some guidance on what is still needed!