Talk:Kingdom of Nathan

Improving the article
Greetings :)

Just a few things about improving the article:

1. The voluminous list of citizens at the bottom isn't really necessary. If you must have it somewhere, your website is the best place for that. Also, I'm not sure that your citizens would be too happy having their real names displayed in a public place on here. Most micronationalists use pseudonyms.

2. As I stated in my edit summary, I removed most of the language categories. This is because a micronation has to claim land in an 'X-speaking region' before it can be classified as such. Having citizens that are from an X-speaking region or being able to speak a language is not counted.

3. I just extensivly fixed the article headings, taking the good part of 20 minutes, as well as fixing up one of the lists. If you would be so good as to fix the rest of the lists of lakes, forests, etc. to have them along the lines of the one that I've just fixed, that would be terrific.

4. I don't doubt your citizen count, as I've found your Facebook group, and added links to that on the page for your convenience. However, as this is the case, and your islands are fictional, your micronation is classified as a 'simulationist' micronation, and, thus, the "highest population" claims are redundant.

5. Now that your page is so long and large, might I suggest taking a look at the Nation Page Guide and its associated pages to create separate pages for the longer and more detailied parts of this page (e.g. a page about the "Provinces of the Kingdom of Nathan").

6. I just put the 'Copyedit' template on the top of the article to invite MicroProject Copy Edit members to come along and assist in improving the article. Please do not remove the template.

If you need any more help, leave a message on my talk page :)

§ A-One § Admin (Talk • Contribs) 10:32, September 2, 2010 (UTC)